Skip to main content

Continue Reading

Next Chapter →
Chapter 14 of 37

THE WOODSMEN'S BARGAIN

Chapter 14: Saff's Igknamai

1,446 words | 7 min read

Ira

The enhanced Igknamai did not disappear when the Hybrid died. They persisted — as Dybgo had warned, the modifications were genetic, not behavioural. The creatures he'd created remained in the forest, operating on the last patterns he'd established, their movements gradually becoming more erratic as the directing intelligence faded but their enhanced size and aggression remaining constant.

Three days after the peace agreement, an enhanced Igknamai breached the palisade.

The creature was massive — larger than any I'd seen, the size of a young bull, its grey hide thickened with the armour-like plating that Dybgo's modifications had produced. It had found a weak point in the northern section where the spiked poles had been damaged by a storm the previous week, and it had forced its way through with a strength that the original palisade design had never needed to accommodate.

The alarm reached us at dawn. I was on the archery range with Saffiya — our last training session before my departure, which Saffiya had scheduled with the particular intensity of someone determined to pack as much instruction as possible into the remaining hours.

The sound was a horn — deep, resonant, blown from the garrison platform in a pattern that I had learned to interpret: breach, northern sector, ground level. Saffiya's reaction was immediate — her body shifting from training mode to combat mode with a speed that would have been alarming in an adult and was genuinely frightening in an eight-year-old.

"Stay here," I said.

"No." The refusal was absolute. Her eyes were hard, her jaw set, her bow already in her hand with an arrow nocked. She was not a child in this moment — she was an archer responding to a threat, and the training that Trilochan had given her and that she had reinforced through four years of daily practice had prepared her for exactly this.

"Saff, you're eight years old—"

"I'm the best archer under twelve. This is what I train for." She moved toward the sound of the horn, her small body navigating the walkway with the speed and confidence of someone for whom the canopy was home terrain. I followed — not because I couldn't have stopped her but because stopping her would have required physical restraint, and the look in her eyes communicated that physical restraint would not have stopped her either.

The northern platform provided a view of the breach. The Igknamai had entered the ground-level area between the palisade and the settlement's first ring of trees — the kill zone, the open space that the Vanavasins maintained between their defences and their homes specifically for this scenario. The creature was moving through the space with the ponderous aggression of something that was too large for stealth and too armoured for the standard defensive response.

Vanavasi archers were already in position on the platforms above the kill zone, their treated arrows striking the creature's hide and bouncing off — the armour plating deflecting the stone tips that had been designed for standard Igknamai. The creature absorbed the arrows the way a boulder absorbed rain: without effect, without acknowledgement, without slowing.

"The armour," Saffiya said, her voice carrying the clinical assessment of an archer evaluating a target's vulnerabilities. "Standard tips won't penetrate. The joints — where the plates meet — that's the weak point. The articulation gaps."

She was right. The armour plating was not continuous — it covered the creature's back, flanks, and skull, but at the joints — the shoulders, the hips, the base of the neck — the plates separated to allow movement, creating gaps where the standard hide was exposed.

"The gaps are small," I said. "At this distance—"

"I can hit them."

"Saff—"

"Watch me."

She drew. The draw was the longest I'd seen from her — the full extension that pulled her small body taut like a bowstring itself, every muscle engaged, every fibre of training converging on the single point of the arrow's tip. She held the draw for three seconds — three seconds of absolute stillness, the eight-year-old body becoming a weapon system, the archer and the bow unified into a single instrument of precision.

The arrow released. It crossed the distance — forty metres, descending from the platform to the kill zone — and struck the Igknamai at the junction between its left shoulder plate and its neck plate. The gap was no wider than my hand. The arrow entered it perfectly, the treated tip penetrating the standard hide beneath the armour and delivering its compound directly into the creature's nervous system.

The Igknamai staggered. Its left foreleg buckled — the nerve disruption spreading from the shoulder through the limb, the creature's massive body tilting, its momentum carrying it forward into a stumbling, off-balance gait that exposed the articulation gap on its right side.

"Again," Saffiya breathed.

She nocked. Drew. Released. The second arrow hit the right shoulder gap — the mirror of the first shot, the symmetry deliberate, the eight-year-old's understanding of anatomy producing a tactical approach that exploited the creature's bilateral structure.

The Igknamai collapsed. Its forelegs gave out simultaneously, the nerve disruption in both shoulders overwhelming the limb control, and its massive body hit the ground with an impact that I felt through the wooden platform — a vibration that travelled up through the tree and into my feet and that communicated, in the language of physics, the weight of what Saffiya had just brought down.

The archers above the kill zone finished it — a volley of arrows into the exposed joints while the creature was immobilised, the treated compounds accumulating in its system until the nervous disruption became fatal. The Igknamai convulsed once, twice, and then was still.

The platform was quiet. The other archers were looking at Saffiya. The look was not surprise — they had seen her shoot, they knew her capability — but it was recognition, the particular acknowledgement of a moment in which capability became proof, in which the potential that had been developing in daily training sessions was realised in a context that mattered.

Saffiya lowered her bow. Her hands were trembling — the adrenaline that her body had suppressed during the shooting now expressing itself in the aftermath, the eight-year-old's physiology catching up with what the eight-year-old's skill had accomplished. She looked at her hands with the bewildered expression of someone who had done something extraordinary and whose body was having the reaction that her mind had postponed.

I knelt beside her. "Saff."

"My hands are shaking."

"I know. That's normal."

"It wasn't normal during training."

"Training doesn't try to kill you. Your body knows the difference." I took her hands in mine. They were small — a child's hands, calloused from the bowstring but still small, still the hands of a person who should have been learning to read and play and do the things that eight-year-olds did on planets where the forest didn't have teeth. But this was her planet, and the forest did have teeth, and her hands — these small, trembling, extraordinary hands — had just brought down a creature that the settlement's adult archers couldn't stop.

"Did I do the right thing?" she asked.

"You saved people, Saff."

"But it was alive. The Igknamai. It was just — it was doing what it was made to do. The Hybrid made it. It didn't choose to be armoured. It didn't choose to attack. It was just — being what someone else made it."

The observation hit me with a force that was disproportionate to the calm, quiet voice that delivered it. An eight-year-old, standing over her first kill, articulating the same moral complexity that Councillor Ananya had raised about Dybgo: the recognition that the thing you destroyed might also be a victim, that the necessity of the destruction did not eliminate the tragedy of the circumstance.

"You're right," I said. "It didn't choose. And you didn't choose to live in a forest where that matters. But you did choose to protect the people in that forest, and that choice is the one that counts."

She looked at her hands. The trembling was subsiding — the adrenaline metabolising, the body returning to baseline. She flexed her fingers, tested her grip, assessed her readiness with the professional attention of an archer evaluating her instrument.

"Same time tomorrow?" she asked.

I wanted to cry. The question — the return to routine, the child's assertion that normalcy could be maintained even after the first kill, the archer's insistence that the training continued regardless of what the training had been used for — was the bravest thing I had ever heard.

"Same time tomorrow," I said.

© 2026 Atharva Inamdar. Licensed under CC BY-NC-ND 4.0. Free to read and share with attribution.