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Chapter 4 of 37

THE WOODSMEN'S BARGAIN

Chapter 4: The Archer's Lesson

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Ira

Saffiya found me at dawn on the second morning, standing on the observation platform that jutted from the eastern edge of the settlement like the prow of a ship — a wooden promontory designed for watching the sunrise and, more practically, for spotting Igknamai movement in the forest below.

She arrived without sound. One moment the platform was empty except for me and the dawn light; the next, she was there — perched on the railing with her oversized bow across her knees and her dark eyes assessing me with the clinical thoroughness of a child who had already decided we were going to be friends and was now determining the terms.

"You said you could shoot," she said, without preamble. Children did not do preamble. Preamble was an adult invention designed to delay the arrival of the point, and Saffiya had no patience for delay.

"I can."

"Prove it."

She led me to the archery range — a series of targets suspended between trees at varying distances and heights, some stationary, some mounted on pendulums that swayed in the wind, simulating the unpredictable movement of Igknamai. The range was deserted at this hour; the regular training sessions didn't begin until after breakfast, which gave Saffiya exactly the private audience she wanted.

She handed me a bow. It was Vanavasi-made — longer than the recurve bows I'd trained with, crafted from a red wood that was simultaneously flexible and strong, with a string made from twisted plant fibre that hummed when I drew it back. The draw weight was heavier than I expected. The wood was warm under my fingers — alive, almost, the grain running in patterns that followed the tree's original growth, as though the bow remembered being a branch and was merely performing a different function.

"That one," Saffiya pointed to a target thirty metres away — a circular disc of woven bark, chest-height. "Centre."

I nocked an arrow. The arrow was longer than I was used to, with a stone tip that had been ground to a point so fine it caught the dawn light like a jewel. I drew, found the target, adjusted for the slight leftward drift of the morning breeze, and released.

The arrow hit centre. Not perfect centre — two centimetres right of the bull — but centre enough that Saffiya's eyebrows rose, which I was already learning was her version of applause.

"Again. The moving one."

The pendulum target was forty metres out, swinging in a three-metre arc. I watched it for two complete swings, timing the rhythm, calculating the lead required, and released on the third swing. The arrow embedded itself in the target's lower-left quadrant — not centre, but a hit on a moving target at forty metres with an unfamiliar bow was respectable by any standard.

Saffiya took the bow from me. She was eight years old and the bow was nearly her height, and watching her draw it was like watching a dancer perform a movement that transcended the physical limitations of the body performing it — her arms were thin, her fingers small, her posture a child's posture, but the form was perfect. The alignment of elbow, shoulder, anchor point, the particular stillness that preceded the release — it was textbook. More than textbook. It was instinct refined by relentless practice into something that looked effortless because the effort had been invested so completely that it had become invisible.

She hit the moving target dead centre. Then she hit the sixty-metre target. Then she hit a leaf — a single leaf, the size of her palm — that was swaying from a branch above the range.

"Trilochan taught me," she said, with the matter-of-fact pride of a child claiming her lineage. "He's the best in the settlement. I'm going to be better."

"How long have you been training?"

"Since I could hold the bow. Four years. Trilochan says I have natural talent, which is his way of saying I'm good without admitting I'm better than he was at my age, which I am, because his early scores are in the records and mine are higher."

I laughed. The sound surprised me — it was the first laugh since Damini's death, the first release of something that wasn't grief or fear or the controlled composure required for survival. The laugh emerged from somewhere behind the weight that sat in my chest, slipping past it like light through a crack, and for a moment — brief, fragile, precious — the weight was lighter.

Saffiya looked pleased. The pleasure was contained — she had the emotional restraint of a child raised in a community where restraint was a survival skill — but it was there, visible in the slight lift of her chin, the almost-imperceptible softening around her eyes.

"I'll teach you," she announced. "Vanavasi archery. It's different from whatever you learned in the sky. Our arrows are designed for Igknamai — the stone tips are treated with compounds that disrupt their nervous system. A body shot slows them. A head shot kills them. You need to learn our technique if you're going to be useful."

"You're going to teach me?"

"I'm the best archer under twelve. Who else would teach you?"

The logic was irrefutable. I followed her to the range, and for the next two hours, Saffiya — eight years old, four feet tall, possessing the patience of a military instructor and the exacting standards of a master craftsman — taught me Vanavasi archery.

The technique was different. The draw was longer, the release sharper, the follow-through extended to maintain the arrow's spin, which was critical for the treated stone tips to penetrate Igknamai hide. Saffiya corrected my elbow angle seven times. She adjusted my anchor point three times. She made me release and re-nock without shooting fourteen times, building the muscle memory for the correct draw cycle before allowing me to waste arrows on imperfect form.

"You're pulling with your arms," she said. "Use your back. The power comes from here" — she placed her small hand between my shoulder blades — "not here." She tapped my bicep. "Arms aim. Back powers. If you pull with your arms, you'll tire in twenty shots. If you pull with your back, you'll tire in two hundred."

The instruction was precise, demanding, and delivered with the absolute authority of someone who had mastered her craft and expected others to respect the mastery by putting in the work required to achieve it. By the time the morning training sessions began and other archers started arriving at the range, I had completed sixty draws, thirty releases, and had hit the moving target four times out of ten — a success rate that Saffiya deemed "acceptable for a first session" and that the arriving archers, who had witnessed the final shots, acknowledged with nods of approval.

"Same time tomorrow," Saffiya said. It was not a request.

Over the following days, the routine established itself — the particular pattern that emerged when displaced people found a temporary home and began, consciously or not, to build the structures of normalcy that the displacement had destroyed.

Mornings: archery with Saffiya, then breakfast on the communal platform. The Vanavasi breakfast was consistent — roasted grains with honey, dried fruit, the bark tea that I was learning to appreciate or at least tolerate. The communal eating was not optional; food was prepared centrally and consumed together, the meal serving both nutritional and social functions, the daily act of sitting together reinforcing the bonds that kept the community cohesive.

Midday: planning sessions with Trilochan, Meenakshi, Rudra, and a rotating group of senior scouts. The planning was for the reconnaissance mission to the Jaldev coastal settlement — the first step in retrieving our ship. Maps were drawn on bark sheets, Igknamai patrol patterns were charted from scout reports, safe corridors were identified and then re-evaluated as new information arrived. Rudra was in his element during these sessions — the captain who had floundered in the aftermath of betrayal finding his footing in the familiar terrain of tactical planning, his mind clicking into the operational mode that was his natural state and that had been disrupted by guilt and grief.

Afternoons: Zara established a medical station in the settlement's healing hut, working alongside the Vanavasi healer — an elderly man named Devraj whose pharmacopeia was entirely forest-derived and whose knowledge of plant-based medicine was, Zara said with the grudging admiration of a scientist encountering a parallel tradition, "terrifyingly comprehensive." Together, they treated injuries, managed the chronic conditions that came from living in a forest full of predators, and developed a hybrid medical practice that combined Zara's surgical precision with Devraj's botanical knowledge.

Evenings: stories. The Vanavasins gathered on the central platform after the evening meal, and someone — Govind, usually, or one of the senior hunters — would tell a story. The stories were history disguised as narrative: the founding of the settlement, the first encounters with the Igknamai, the great fire that had destroyed the western sector three generations ago and the rebuilding that had followed, the arrival of the Jaldevs on the coast and the uneasy peace that had held until the Hybrid's emergence. The stories served the same function as the communal meals — reinforcing identity, transmitting knowledge, reminding every member of the community who they were and why the trees they lived in mattered.

I listened to the stories and felt the particular ache of someone who was being offered belonging but who could not fully accept it because the belonging was temporary — we were leaving, eventually, when the ship was recovered, when the Hybrid was dealt with, when the bargain was complete. The Vanavasi settlement was a waystation, not a destination, and the distinction mattered because allowing myself to belong fully would make leaving harder and I could not afford harder.

But Saffiya didn't know about the distinction. Saffiya treated my presence as permanent — a fixed variable in her daily calculations, the sky-person who could shoot and who was getting better and who listened to her archery lectures with the particular attention of an adult who respected her expertise. For Saffiya, I was staying, and the certainty of a child's assumption was a weight that I carried alongside the lighter weight of being taught something by someone who cared about the teaching.

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